Ion
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Post by Ion on Oct 3, 2007 16:49:06 GMT -5
Name: Alice Age: 793 Gender: Male Orientation: Straight Class: Knight Height: 6'8'' Alignment: Evilly Neutral unless he sees something he wants. Personality: Will befriend then kill you to get closer to his goal. Appearance: Skeleton dressed in Knight armor from the middle ages that has all of that heavy metal that is all black on him, with a red cross in the middle and a full black helmet with only one eye slot. Top of the helmet has red feathers on top of it. Usually carries a ball and chain on waist with a sword and shield on his back. Rides a demonic looking horse that is black with red eyes. Many battle marks on his armor like small gashes and scratches. History: Though in many mythological books from the first fifty centuries, he is known to be called the bringer of Hell. Most recent information discovered has led to believe that he was a part of King Arthur's Knights of the Round Table, but was said to be sacrificed in front of a crowd of 50 at the foot of the kings castle. His last words recorded, as stated by one European journalist, "**** you all to Hell! **** you all! When I return I shall set my wrath upon thou and thy world until the End of Days!" Then townspeople had eventually forgotten about him and no none has seen him since. Although his grave in the center of the castle was just found dug up and the casket smashed open but only holding a skeleton inside.
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Post by theevilgood on Oct 3, 2007 20:24:28 GMT -5
Sorry, Curtis, but no.
1: He seems REALLY powerful. Like, overly so 2: He's not even the right timeline. Please, actually read the story for the RP
Please, follow the rules >.<
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Post by Kit on Oct 12, 2007 6:25:17 GMT -5
1) A man called Alice. Think for a moment. Although there were a few feminine men names in history, Alice was never one. 2) If they have his body (technically) how is he...existing...unless he's not that historical character, and is simply believed to be? Example, Nanya, a character in my fiction, was rumoured for a long time to be the last remaining member of a tribe of Demons - she isn't but people thought she was. It just made it a little less obvious, because now readers were wondering who she really was, and I'm now free to think up a true identity in my own time, rather than having the pre-existing image people had when they thought of that type of Demon ADDING ON THIS Perhaps this Knight, upon his death, summoned hells wrath upon the town? Although, why would hell care if a good guy just died? You could easily theorise that this Knight was defending the town from hells forces, when he died, hell took over - you said they forgot about him, perhaps because they were being tormented from this evil knight? He hasn't been seen since because he's dead. The armour with the red cross? Being ironic. 3) It's better to avoid any reference to real life events in a character. It's just a pain. In Evils roleplay, we're probably literally millenia from that period, so the age is out by god knows how many years. The other two are based in alternate worlds, so they won't know who the Knights were. 4) Heavy armour, heavy ball and chain, predictibly heavy sheild...how does this skeleton carry all this again? 5) Sacrificed? Why? You realise that the closest to sacrificing England had at this point was witch burning, yeah? If you were in an Aztec place, I'd get it, but you're not. Unless they were in a satanic cult, but then this would've been done in secret. Initial character design is my strongest point
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Post by theevilgood on Oct 12, 2007 10:12:19 GMT -5
Just a little point, Alice Cooper was a man
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Post by f***inguptheflair on Oct 12, 2007 21:10:01 GMT -5
...but that was never his real name.
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